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#126
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Maybe they're two separate stories. Your plot has different characters, your characters have a different plot.



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You know, I just realized what's been hanging me up with writing this story.  I've been reading about the differences between plot-drivien stories and character-driven ones, and it dawned on me for the first time that I'm trying to do both and the two stories aren't meshing.  I've been trying to tell one story with the characters, and then their is the plot.  The plot has been getting in the way of what I'm trying to do with the charactes, and vice versa.  I think that's why I'm not getting anywhere.  I haven't been willing to compromise the plot or the characters as I have them, but now I'm thinking that one of them has to be a bigger priority.  Do I change the plot to suit the characters, or do I change the characters to better fit the plot-driven story?  


It can be tricky, but you can mesh them if you build in thematic triggers. A lot of stories will do the plot on a present frame, but then build character in flashbacks, for example. There's just usually some sort of cue to hand off between them.

This is also why the hero's journey is so often used. It's a constant hand off between a plot and the changes in the hero it triggers.

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You know, I just realized what's been hanging me up with writing this story.  I've been reading about the differences between plot-drivien stories and character-driven ones, and it dawned on me for the first time that I'm trying to do both and the two stories aren't meshing.  I've been trying to tell one story with the characters, and then their is the plot.  The plot has been getting in the way of what I'm trying to do with the charactes, and vice versa.  I think that's why I'm not getting anywhere.  I haven't been willing to compromise the plot or the characters as I have them, but now I'm thinking that one of them has to be a bigger priority.  Do I change the plot to suit the characters, or do I change the characters to better fit the plot-driven story?  


It can be tricky, but you can mesh them if you build in thematic triggers. A lot of stories will do the plot on a present frame, but then build character in flashbacks, for example. There's just usually some sort of cue to hand off between them.

This is also why the hero's journey is so often used. It's a constant hand off between a plot and the changes in the hero it triggers.

 

Wouldn't the ultimate goal be to reveal character in moments that occur naturally in the plot? Rather than have to work in flashbacks to do it?



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You know, I just realized what's been hanging me up with writing this story.  I've been reading about the differences between plot-drivien stories and character-driven ones, and it dawned on me for the first time that I'm trying to do both and the two stories aren't meshing.  I've been trying to tell one story with the characters, and then their is the plot.  The plot has been getting in the way of what I'm trying to do with the charactes, and vice versa.  I think that's why I'm not getting anywhere.  I haven't been willing to compromise the plot or the characters as I have them, but now I'm thinking that one of them has to be a bigger priority.  Do I change the plot to suit the characters, or do I change the characters to better fit the plot-driven story?  

It can be tricky, but you can mesh them if you build in thematic triggers. A lot of stories will do the plot on a present frame, but then build character in flashbacks, for example. There's just usually some sort of cue to hand off between them.

This is also why the hero's journey is so often used. It's a constant hand off between a plot and the changes in the hero it triggers.
 
Wouldn't the ultimate goal be to reveal character in moments that occur naturally in the plot? Rather than have to work in flashbacks to do it?

In a perfect world, absolutely.

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The problem I'm having is, the character story that I'm wanting to tell requires a different backstory than the plot-driven story I want to tell.  For example, the plot of the story requires a certain character to have backstory X, but I'm finding that I need this character to have backstory Y for the character story to work.  But if I change the history of said character from X to Y, then the plot changes too because the premise of the story is contingent upon X.  That's what I mean about not getting them to mesh.  So now I'm stuck on X vs Y.  The only way I can see doing both is to compromise on some things that I'd rather not.  This is what always happens whenever I try to write something.  I inevitably get stuck with this kind of dilemma, and now I'm recognizing that at its heart is plot vs character.  I never know which of these two should be in the driver's seat. 



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I just thought of a good analogy to illustrate my dilemma.  Stories typically have an action-driven component, and a character component, right?  In ROTJ, we see the rebellion lead an attack on the DS, while Han and Leia are down on Endor trying to disable the shields.  That's all plot driven stuff, right?  Meanwhile we see a more human story play out in the thrown room, a story where people aren't just reacting to external events, but one in which their choices are the focus and shape future events.

 

So, which typically comes first in writing?  Is the human story born out of the plot-driven one, or does the human story come first and the plot is framed around that?  I feel like my plot-driven story and my human story are struggling for dominance.  I already know the beginning and end of the story, so I know the bounds.  But it seems that the character story has grown outside those bounds.  Changing the bounds means changing the story on a pretty fundamental level, and I'm reluctant to do that because I really like what I've done and I don't want to part with it.  But maybe I should?  Maybe that's how stories evolve?  But it somehow feels wrong.  



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Unless you're writing military hard scifi/fantasy, character based os the way to go. Everything plot driven with the OT was framed around Luke's journey.

If the two things you have are incompatible and you don't want to change either, you're probably looking at two different stories.

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I've always liked stories where the lead character is a nobody who gets swept up in something big, and this is what I was originally going for.  The lead character led a very sheltered existence.  He's a human  raised in dwarven mines and pretty much knows nothing of the outside world or of his own people.  This character has to leave home for the first time to go on a quest with a group of strangers.  For the most part, I have the quest figured out (the destination, the purpose, the role the lead character must play in it, etc.)

 

But at some point, I decided that this is a story about betrayal.  This character betrays everyone in the group.  He does this due to being conflicted.  His whole life was spent devoted to a single cause, and that was taken away from him (I'm thinking he's an excommunicated knight).  When the reader is first introduced to him, he is in a very bad place.  He's broken and robbed of his identity and purpose in life.  Throughout the story we see him heal and form strong bonds with his traveling companions, especially one in particular. Through the quest, he finds a new purpose.  A big twist comes when he is offered a chance to return to his old life, and in a moment of weakness, he accepts, betraying everyone in the process.  If this is what happens, it would mean giving the character a more complicated backstory.  He's got a lot of emotional baggage that he's carried around from earlier experiences.  Its no longer a simple story of a young inexperienced nobody who gets to go on an adventure, and that's the story I wanted to tell.  



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Had my first day of work today since my surgery.  It's 2 weeks ahead of schedule so I didn't know what to expect but I actually felt great.   finished the entire 8 hour shift with no problem at all.  I actually felt physically better than I have in a long time.  I suppose it has something to do with the increased blood flow to my heart but it's also got to be my attitude. 

 

It's cliche but I really do feel like I have a new lease on life.  I'm doing everything the doctors told me to do:  I'm eating healthy, walking daily, following up with all my doctors... I have a whole team of them now lol  Primary Care doctor, Cardiogist, Cardiology Surgical specialist, Pain Management doctor, Orthopedic doctor, Dermatologist, Psychiatrist and soon to be a Cardio rehab therapist.

 

The Cardiologist said that if I do the right things I could live to my 80's, possibly 90's.  So far I'm doing it and it's not really a struggle.  The walking has been challenging some days only because my back is messed up.  The eating right has been very easy.  I eliminated all salt, eating steamed veggies and I bought this AMAZING indoor grill called the Foodi Ninja Grill and it had changed my life!  I bought chicken breasts from Costco and have been grilling them up with spices and it's just flawless.  Cleanup is a since too.  I also lost 44 lbs in the past 6 weeks so that's a plus!

 

Things are going very well.


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I've always liked stories where the lead character is a nobody who gets swept up in something big, and this is what I was originally going for.  The lead character led a very sheltered existence.  He's a human  raised in dwarven mines and pretty much knows nothing of the outside world or of his own people.  This character has to leave home for the first time to go on a quest with a group of strangers.  For the most part, I have the quest figured out (the destination, the purpose, the role the lead character must play in it, etc.)
 
But at some point, I decided that this is a story about betrayal.  This character betrays everyone in the group.  He does this due to being conflicted.  His whole life was spent devoted to a single cause, and that was taken away from him (I'm thinking he's an excommunicated knight).  When the reader is first introduced to him, he is in a very bad place.  He's broken and robbed of his identity and purpose in life.  Throughout the story we see him heal and form strong bonds with his traveling companions, especially one in particular. Through the quest, he finds a new purpose.  A big twist comes when he is offered a chance to return to his old life, and in a moment of weakness, he accepts, betraying everyone in the process.  If this is what happens, it would mean giving the character a more complicated backstory.  He's got a lot of emotional baggage that he's carried around from earlier experiences.  Its no longer a simple story of a young inexperienced nobody who gets to go on an adventure, and that's the story I wanted to tell.  


Yeah, those are two different stories.... unless you go epic and do a Canterbury Tales / Hyperion type thing where everyone in the party gets their own disparate back story. Maybe you make the incongruity your device and go big.

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Or make them 2 different characters in the same story?

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That's rough, man-- really sorry.
I'm waiting to get paid on a few jobs, just took over a mortgage I've been splitting for a decade, and I am stockpiling for a possible writer's strike in the spring.

But I will throw you something if I can wring money out of these rich ass studios soon.



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