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Copper

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A sequined black gown splashed down Cecilia's torso, shimmering like slick, over-sized scales on a mermaid's finned tail. Her hair was cut short in a bob that ended severely at her jaw; it exactly matched the color and shine of her dress. Cecilia ran her fingers through it now. There was a lust, a restlessness, rising up from her hips to her pinched waist, slapping against the defined slash of her rib bones. Berry nails slid down a neck unmolested by the staining rays of the sun, dipped into delicate cups formed by taut skin and gossamer thin collarbones.

“You are an enchanting display,”

“Am I?" She arched a sculpted brow. "All you see is the magic of this movie. Two hours- that’s how long it took the magicians to do my hair and makeup this morning. This dress? It was tailored for me. It perfectly accents every one of my attributes while simultaneously hiding any imperfection. Nothing has fit me better since I fell from my mother’s womb.” She turned, leaned her elbows on the table, her painted nails tickling the blush of an apple. “But in the morning when you wake beside me and find that this skin is not, indeed, without flaw this image you have of me, right now, will shatter. And even if you enlist the help of all the King’s men you won’t be able to put it back together again.” She lifted the apple, weighed it in her palm, “perfection should remain untouched."

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Antilla

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Exactly 250 words. Exactly.

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ShadowDog

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I'm troubled that you took the time to count them. LMFAO It is a nice achievement though.

This was very lovely: "Berry nails slid down a neck unmolested by the staining rays of the sun, dipped into delicate cups formed by taut skin and gossamer thin collarbones." You're the only one here who can do this. I think either my brain would explode or I'd turn gay if I tried.

Great job, Copper!

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Copper

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Thanks Shadowdog! What a lovely compliment.

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Sonny

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He's right. Words are not just game tokens for you as a writer, you obviously love them and it shows.

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Iceheart

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Very nice :)

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Foxglove

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My Spidey sense is tingling and it tells me this is very good. :)



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