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DeathLurtz

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Thousands of his pictures covered the walls and floor of john's empty studio apartment as he laid bloody and breathless in a pile of the culmination of his life's work, the cataloging of every moment he could capture on film, whether awe inspiringly beautiful or stomach churningly disgusting. His lifeless eyes were fixed upon the crimson writing on the ceiling, " The camera never lies!"

more to come soon, I hope.

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I hope so too as this one was very good. I'm going to ask you the same question I asked Cashmere. Is this one from "out of the air" or do you have a story plotted out to go along with it?

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DeathLurtz

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I definetely pulled that out of nowhere.

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Sonny

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You should keep going with that, it's good!

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DeathLurtz

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Thank you! I might. I really liked where that went as I was coming up with it.

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this was great! :)

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This is ****ing awesome. The last two lines are very inspired. I'm finding that my favorites are ones that really nail it with the final line or two so this puts you in my top 5 overall.

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Love it, Lurtz! It gives a super creepy vibe.

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Thousands of his pictures covered the walls and floor of john's empty studio apartment as he laid bloody and breathless in a pile of the culmination of his life's work, the cataloging of every moment he could capture on film, whether awe inspiringly beautiful or stomach churningly disgusting. His lifeless eyes were fixed upon the crimson writing on the ceiling, " The camera never lies!"

more to come soon, I hope.

Definitely keep on going with this.



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