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Cashmere's lines


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Cashmere

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"Pull yourself together," Emma thought as she pulled on her dingy coat and mismatched gloves. "How are you supposed to find food for baby David if you spend all morning sleeping? After all, you're six years old now and you're all he's got."


Today is supposed to be the best day of my life, but now, even hours later, all I can see is the rain spattering on the sign: FLORIDA STATE PENITENTIARY. I used my phone call to leave a message for my mom, but it's only a matter of time before my bride-to-be finds out. She's going to kill me.

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Sonny

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I like the first one better because it gives less away, but they are both fantastic. Are these based on full ideas or did you merely do the openings?

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Today is supposed to be the best day of my life, but now, even hours later, all I can see is the rain spattering on the sign: FLORIDA STATE PENITENTIARY. I used my phone call to leave a message for my mom, but it's only a matter of time before my bride-to-be finds out. She's going to kill me.



Well, on the bright side, his bride probably thinks he decided not to marry her and backed out. Maybe she'll be relieved he still wants to be there, he just can't make it because he's behind bars. :D

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ShadowDog

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LMFAO! Somehow, I don't think that's going to be any consolation for her.

Good stuff, Cashy! :drool:

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Cashmere

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Finally back in here to answer your question, Sonny! Both of these were desperate attempts to submit something in the space of a single lunch break. Nothing beyond these sentences exists.

Thanks for the feedback, book club types. :D

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GreenLightBaby

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The first one is intriguing. The second one just keeps me laughing.



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