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Tease me, Tempt Me, Read Me


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He’d recognize her sexy long legs anywhere. Last time they were perfectly tight around his waist. Heaven.


~*~*~*~*~*~


Feeling the pull of the kaleidoscope of light and howling wind, he called to her, "Follow me!"

Placing her hands over her heart, she shook her head, shouting, "I'm scared."

Darkness fell as the sniper's bullet rang out.

~*~*~*~*~*~

Awaiting their execution by firing squad, Anna slapped Jake with her handcuffs muttering, "It's your ****ing fault we got caught."

Dropping down on one knee, Jake pleaded, "Marry me Anna."

"Marry me and live, Anna, or marry Jake and die," boomed a male voice from the speakers above them.

~*~*~*~*~*~

Death stalked me. The swing of the scythe just a hairbreadth from decapitating me. Unfortunately, Death never saw his own death -- by his own scythe.


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Just a reminder, I'm waiting until I finish mine to read everybody else's and give my feedback. :drool:

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Just a reminder, I'm waiting until I finish mine to read everybody else's and give my feedback. :drool:

And I thought it was just because of the title of the post that got you to reply. ;)

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Well, that played a part. :drool:

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You're weird. I've been reading them so I ensure that I don't overlap anyone else. (and I can't resist.)

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Well, that played a part. :drool:

Apparently, you weren't the only one because the page views jumped by more than 20 in less than an hour. :)

You're weird. I've been reading them so I ensure that I don't overlap anyone else. (and I can't resist.)

I'll read them later because I don't want to get influenced. ;)

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The one about Death is hilarious. In fact, that is practically a flash fiction. A little work and perhaps another paragraph and you'd have a complete flash fiction story there.

But the firing squad opening is my favorite of them all. That strong an opening would have me hooked for sure.

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"Charlie's motto is 'Live, grow stronger, let Prozac, Abilify, Sominex, Prilosec, Aricept and Viagra take care of the rest, especially the Viagra.' "

As Karen mixed the powered drug cocktail into his red wine, she murmured, "You forgot the nitroglycerin, but I didn't."

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The one about Death is hilarious. In fact, that is practically a flash fiction. A little work and perhaps another paragraph and you'd have a complete flash fiction story there.

But the firing squad opening is my favorite of them all. That strong an opening would have me hooked for sure.

Yeah, poor Death. Let's just say Jack Bauer is now Death. :lol:

The firing squad one came from the kick-off NaNoWriMo party. We were asked to come up with a scenario and we played it like "Who's Line is it, anyway?" My scenario was two people pledging their undying love while waiting for a firing squad. I lost because I said something like this, "This is all your damn fault!" which wasn't in a form of a question. What can I say, I really got into character. :D

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Silence is a virtue after bad sex.

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I specifically thought of you when I included an action category. So it's a good thing you entered. Or else I would have been devastated. Maybe just glum for a few minutes. There would have definitely been a frown.

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I specifically thought of you when I included an action category. So it's a good thing you entered. Or else I would have been devastated. Maybe just glum for a few minutes. There would have definitely been a frown.


I'm honored and how could I resist? I tend to form stories around an opening line, a piece of dialogue or an action sequence.

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The only time I've been like Jack Bauer is when I played and won the arcade version of Time Crisis II with one quarter. Unlike Jack Bauer, who lost two lives, I lost none of the three I had. Then Jack Bauer turned to me and asked, "You ever been in a Chinese prison?"

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I love the sex one. I don't know what that says about me, but there you go!

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I love the sex one. I don't know what that says about me, but there you go!

It still cracks me up. I was thinking of quotes and how I'd change them up to make them funny. Originally, I had it as "Silence is a virtue and so is counting to ten especially after bad sex." Just too wordy so I cut out most of it.



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