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Ericka's Opening Lines


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IMericka

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1. It was the sound of the gravel that gave him away. The peep hole's range of vision wasn't wide enough to tell, but she suspected he was pacing rather than leaving. She locked the deadbolt just in case, and wondered if it would hold when the time came.

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Foxglove

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That's good stuff.

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Sonny

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There is a lot of promise in this one. I love it.

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ShadowDog

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This is really good. MOAR!!! DO MOAR BEFORE THE DEADLINE!! :drool:

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Nixie

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i love this. :)

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Very solid entry, Ericka. It fills me with a sense of dread every time I read it. Nice job.

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This shows a lot of promise. Any chance you're going to add to it?



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