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Nixie

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:blush:

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Each snowflake that fell on Lisa's openly staring and freshly dead eyes took approximately 2 minutes to melt. This process was an unintentional but fitting commentary on her now finished life.

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Their first look lasted one full breath, their first kiss lasted one full heartbeat, but their first argument lasted the rest of their lives. Harold and Eloise's relationship could be summed up suchly.

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Antilla

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I really like your #2. I think the wording is clever and I'm really curious as to what sort of argument could last an entire lifetime.

It's the toilet seat up/toilet seat down thing, isn't it?

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LMFAO! Undoubtedly.

Good work Nixikins. :drool:

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oooh, #2 fosho

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I have to agree. I hope a story is to follow it at some point.

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Afraid to come back in and get your feedback, huh? :drool:

Well, you shouldn't be afraid because this **** is good. I'm with the chorus though that number two is better.

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i wasnt afraid! i was busy. yea thats the ticket. :blush:

thx guys! :)

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I love number 2 as well. It is simply stated but definitely pulls me in so I want to know more.

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#2 grabs my attention more. First argument, oh I can think of a few things. I'd like to read yours though. :)



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