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Antilla

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Edited by Antilla, 28 November 2009 - 12:44 PM.


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Kokeshi_Doll769

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    oh hey i didn't see you there

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I feel so dwarfed by your considerable skill, sir.

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Ancient starch caused the lace to crackle as she swam through the gown’s yellowed fabric. Oksana felt like a free diver, skin to satin, pushing for the surface; controlling her ascent to stave off the bends. Slow. Steady. Allow yourself to depressurize gradually, not like the last panicky rookie.


Love this. I especially love it for the "last panicky rookie" part, considering it's a used wedding gown. Nice touch.

And. "so buried alive". really now. Quite making me hate you so much.

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ElfinYoda

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So witty and forceful with words Antilla!

Is it really you writing or do you have an extraordinary gnome who can write doing your work? ;)

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I especially like the rage portion of this one. A very creative way to give background on your first character. Nice work! :)

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Antilla

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Edited by Antilla, 28 November 2009 - 12:45 PM.




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