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Lurtz's Minis

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    Good thing they stamped that fire out quickly.

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Here is my mini for round two. Hopefully I didn't have to be a part of round one to still be able to play.

The Waiting Room

“I said, my mother’s in the hospital dammit!”

Michael stared listlessly at the floor, hardly aware there was someone else in the room.

Sabrina, tears rolling off her freckled cheeks, slammed the phone down on the table in front of Michael in an attempt to bring him out of his own head.

“Are you even listening to me?”


Michael shifted his half focused, unemotional gaze onto Sabrina.

She looked into his eyes and found nothing. The shoulder she expected to rest her head on was not there, leaving her falling towards despair, grasping for something to give her strength.

She trembled as she gathered her keys, threw on her coat and headed for the door.

“Aren’t you coming with me?” she forced out between the sobbing and the uncontrolled breathing.

Michael looked at her as she stood in the doorway, waiting for him. Sabrina’s hope grew high as he opened his mouth to speak. She knew she wouldn’t be alone in the waiting room.

“I don’t think this is gonna work out.”

Thomas Alan

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I assume the Basil rule is in effect.



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I'll make the executive decision that goes something like this: the more the merrier! Welcome aboard Lurtz!



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haha, yeah. Merrier indeed!

Nice job, Lurtz. That guy is kind of an ***hole.



    oh hey i didn't see you there

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all because he can't care? maybe he's depressed ok!

good entry, Lurtz...I specially liked the line about the shoulder not being there etc.

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