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The only bad thing I can say about this piece is I find that font really hard to read, and the lack of spaces only made it more difficult.

If that is the only bad thing you can find to say . . . I am pleased.


Once again, I am impressed.

Thank you very much!

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Corpus and Houston are like 4 hours apart!!

But yeah, you're far from here.

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I'm right in the middle.

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I tyink the chunks, grammar and punctuation are fitting for this story. It's not easy on the reader, but it's not suppose to be. It keeps it very emotional and high impact. I'm glad you changed it back.

Great story and unique viewpoint.

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Interesting story! I like the viewpoint. It's very different.

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It's not easy on the reader, but it's not suppose to be.

Thanks for noticing.


Interesting story! I like the viewpoint. It's very different.

Thanks, I like different.

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Another hard-hitting piece...you have rawness to your style that I really like. It comes off feeling a bit Palahniuk-y. I like it.

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double post wtf.

Edited by Kokeshi_Doll769, 17 September 2007 - 10:55 PM.


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Another hard-hitting piece...you have rawness to your style that I really like. It comes off feeling a bit Palahniuk-y. I like it.

Thanks. I :heart: Chuck. What of his does it feel like? I don't see the resemblance. I can kinda see the feeling if I squint at Your Name Here.



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