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bonnie13

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  1. That could be. It is usually me that is first in line. Do you have stats on who started first?

    Just wait until you see what questions that I have though. I have a few from personal experience from me, so I am the source.

  2. Lunch Break

     

    I decided to walk

    on the railroad tracks

    for my lunch break.

    It was great fun

    so I thought.

    I carefully crossed

    the highway.

    There was this creek

    of which the tracks

    did cross over.

    I thought I would

    cross on over

    to the other side.

    I got about half way across

    when I stopped right there

    Looking down had got me afraid

    Of even moving another inch.

    My hands became sweaty

    As did my forehead

    My knees were knocking

    And I was shaking.

    That was some place

    to remind me that I had

    this fear of heights

    If I did not have

    something to hang on to.

    I tried to reason with myself

    Reminding myself that I had walk

    On the tracks all this way

    Why should I be afraid now?

    Come on, turn around and get off.

    I moved my foot a little

    knocking some rocks

    into the creek.

    Now I knew that I would not fall in

    But still I seem to be stuck.

    Right in the middle.

    I did not want to be

    some sort of attraction.

    Time was slowly clicking away

    I needed to get back to work.

    But I was stuck.

    I bent over

    I grabbed the steel rail itself.

    I slowly inched my way

    Bent over with my hands firmly

    On the rail

    Crossing back to where the bridge ended.

    And got off of the tracks.

    I had just enough time to spare.

    Some lunch break.

  3. edit: yeah, I'm one of those obsessive people who hates grammar mistakes :blush:

    LOL

    I am the same way at editing or deleting parts of my post

     

    I liked the shortness and the last line, for it left a lot up to the imagination

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